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🟥Year 10 ELL Writing a Recount

Worksheet – Lesson 2: Recount Writing

Learning Intention:
We are learning to write a clear recount using:

  • Past tense verbs

  • Time connectives

  • Clear paragraph structure

Success Criteria:
✔ I use past tense correctly
✔ I organise my writing into paragraphs
✔ I use time words (first, next, then, finally)
✔ My recount is clear and easy to follow


Part 1: What is a Recount?

A recount retells something that already happened.
It is written in past tense.
It tells events in time order.

Example Recount

"Last Saturday, I went to the beach with my cousins. First, we set up our towels and played volleyball. Then we went swimming in the cold water. After that, we had fish and chips for lunch. Finally, we watched the sunset before going home. I felt tired but happy after such a fun day."

Questions

  1. What tense is used in this recount? __________________

  2. Circle the time connectives in the example.

  3. How many paragraphs are there? __________________


Part 2: Past Tense Practice

Change these verbs into the past tense:

PresentPast
go__________
eat__________
see__________
play__________
make__________
help__________

Now rewrite the sentences in past tense:

  1. Yesterday I go to the park.
    → __________________________________________

  2. We play basketball after school.
    → __________________________________________

  3. My family have dinner together.
    → __________________________________________


Part 3: Time Connectives

Time connectives help organise your recount.

Examples:

  • First

  • Next

  • Then

  • After that

  • Finally

  • Later

Add time connectives to this paragraph:

"I woke up early. I got dressed. I caught the bus. I arrived at school."

Rewrite the paragraph with time connectives:




Part 4: Paragraph Structure

A recount usually has:

Paragraph 1 – Introduction

  • When did it happen?

  • Where were you?

  • Who was there?

Paragraph 2 – Events

  • What happened?

  • What happened next?

Paragraph 3 – Conclusion

  • How did you feel?

  • What did you learn or think?


Part 5: Editing Practice

Read this recount and correct the mistakes:

"Last weekend I go to my aunt house. first we eat lunch. Then we watch a movie and play cards it was very fun. finally I go home and sleep."

Rewrite it correctly:





Part 6: Planning Your Recount

Think about a recent experience (e.g., family event, sports game, school trip, cultural celebration).

Fill in the plan:

When did it happen? ______________________________

Where were you? ______________________________

Who was there? ______________________________

What happened first? ______________________________

What happened next? ______________________________

How did you feel? ______________________________


Part 7: Portfolio Task – Structured Recount

Write your second portfolio piece:
Title: A Memorable Day

  • Use 3 paragraphs

  • Use past tense verbs

  • Use time connectives

  • Check spelling and punctuation

Write your recount below:








Reflection

✔ Did I use past tense correctly?
✔ Did I organise my ideas into paragraphs?
✔ Did I use time connectives?
✔ Did I check punctuation and capital letters?

What is one thing I improved in this writing?





Teacher Notes – Lesson 2: Recount Writing

Curriculum Links

New Zealand Curriculum (NZC) – English

  • Structure: Organises ideas into paragraphs.

  • Language Features: Uses past tense, sentence punctuation, and sequencing vocabulary appropriately.

English Language Learning Progressions (ELLP)

  • Past tense verb control (regular + common irregular verbs)

  • Use of time connectives for sequencing

  • Basic paragraph structure (introduction, events, conclusion)

  • Increasing sentence accuracy and punctuation control


Part 1: What is a Recount?

Expected Answers:

  1. Past tense

  2. Time connectives: First, Then, After that, Finally

  3. One paragraph (teacher can discuss how it could also be structured into three paragraphs for stronger organisation)

Teaching Notes:

  • Highlight verb endings (-ed) and irregular verbs (went, had).

  • Ask: “Why do we use past tense in a recount?”

  • Model splitting the example into three paragraphs to demonstrate structure.


Part 2: Past Tense Practice

Verb Table Answers:

PresentPast
gowent
eatate
seesaw
playplayed
makemade
helphelped

Sentence Corrections:

  1. Yesterday I went to the park.

  2. We played basketball after school.

  3. My family had dinner together.

Teaching Notes:

  • Explicitly teach irregular verbs (go → went, eat → ate, have → had).

  • Create a class anchor chart of common irregular verbs.

  • Encourage students to check verbs during editing.


Part 3: Time Connectives

Possible Model Answer:

“First, I woke up early. Next, I got dressed. Then, I caught the bus. Finally, I arrived at school.”

Teaching Notes:

  • Accept variations (After that, Later, etc.).

  • Emphasise logical sequencing.

  • Encourage students not to overuse the same connective repeatedly.


Part 4: Paragraph Structure

Teaching Clarification:

Strong recounts should have:

Paragraph 1 – Orientation

  • When

  • Where

  • Who

Paragraph 2 – Events (in order)

Paragraph 3 – Personal reflection

Model an example on the board and label each paragraph.


Part 5: Editing Practice

Corrected Version (Model Answer):

“Last weekend, I went to my aunt’s house. First, we ate lunch. Then we watched a movie and played cards. It was very fun. Finally, I went home and slept.”

Errors Students Should Notice:

  • Verb tense (go → went, eat → ate, watch → watched, play → played)

  • Capital letters (First, Finally)

  • Apostrophe (aunt’s house)

  • Missing full stop before “It”

  • Verb tense consistency (sleep → slept)

Teaching Notes:

  • Encourage students to read aloud to hear mistakes.

  • Focus on one error type at a time (verbs, punctuation, capitals).


Part 6: Planning Section

Teacher Guidance:

Check that students:

  • Choose a real event

  • Plan events in chronological order

  • Include feelings for reflection

Support ELL students with sentence starters:

  • “Last week, I…”

  • “First, we…”

  • “After that…”

  • “I felt…”


Part 7: Portfolio Task – Structured Recount

Suggested Assessment Focus (Formative)

CriteriaEmergingDevelopingSecure
Past TenseFrequent errorsSome errors but meaning clearMostly accurate
Time ConnectivesFew or missingSome sequencingClear logical sequence
Paragraph StructureOne block of textSome paragraph awarenessClear 3-paragraph structure
Sentence AccuracyRun-ons/fragmentsSome correct sentencesMostly complete sentences

Model Portfolio Example (High-Level Response)

A Memorable Day

Last month, I went to a cultural festival with my family at the community centre. My cousins and grandparents were there, and the weather was sunny.

First, we watched traditional performances. Then we tasted different foods and walked around the stalls. After that, I joined a group activity where we learned a new dance. Finally, we took photos together before going home.

I felt proud and excited because I learned something new and spent time with my family. It was a special day that I will always remember.


Reflection Guidance

Encourage students to identify:

  • One grammar improvement

  • One structural improvement

  • One area to improve next time


Differentiation Ideas

For lower-level ELL learners:

  • Provide a fill-in-the-blank paragraph frame.

  • Provide a verb list with past tense forms.

  • Allow oral rehearsal before writing.

For higher-level learners:

  • Encourage varied time connectives.

  • Encourage compound/complex sentences.

  • Add sensory details for depth.




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